Monday, July 4, 2016

Clark Family and Co Round Up

Ugh, so I stupidly just deleted this post, so let's try again....

Clark family picspiration roll call ! 

Cody Grady, 23
In both OHG and UL, Cody's last name is Turner but I am just now realizing this so...retcon !























Zane Brooks, 22

















Ms. Jocelyn Clark, 46 




















It's mostly about the hair.

Savannah Clark, 14

















Deacon Clark, 41


















Macy Sullivan, 27
She doesn't show up much, but I so clearly saw her as Marcia Cross


















Chapter 3
I wrote about this in the A/N, but the idea for this chapter is what got me thinking about OHG. I don't know why I didn't write it, but I left it in as a throwaway line:

I was not happy when we had to part ways after his graduation party. He had to go back to Louisiana and I was stuck in Hartford. It seemed to be a bearable existence until he let me visit him Memorial’s Day  a few weeks later.

I can’t remember the weekend but, I remember crying on the bus the whole way back home. I didn't want to leave.
Chapter 4 and 5
I wasn't originally going to do a double chapter post, but let's keep the story moving....


Recap
Just out of jail Juliana is waitressing at a restaurant and adjusting to life with her Dad in Connecticut. She gets an invite to Freeport, Louisiana to spend the weekend with Rhett Clark where she goes to a family BBQ and sees how he's moved on and meets his friends and family

Chapter 4
Playlist
-1- Distant Sures- by  The Cave Singers
-2- Fall  for You by Leela James
-3- Let it Go by James Bay


Chapter 5
-1-  Hear Your Heart by James Bay
-2-  Fast Car by Ray Montbleau

Tuesday, June 28, 2016

Picspirations: Nicholas Hoult in Good Lighting


Chapter 1
So, chapter 1 was written when I was about six chapters in. As I was doing research about halfway houses for other parts I ended up reading a lot of exposes and white papers ( I go down the craziest rabbit holes) that basically said Halfway houses--particularly Florida ones-- are horribly run, dangerous and don't work. I'd originally envisioned halfway houses as better than jail but when I realized that wasn't true I wanted to write a little bit of that. The thing about OHG is it completely ignores Juliana's experiences in jail.


On a happier note....I think it's picspiration time! Here's the thing about UL. It's almost impossible for me to find picspirations but I thoght I'd try to get as close as I can. I'll do more characters as we are introduced to them.




Juliana Reese, 21
 I imagine a young Rose McIver. Juliana's been through a lot so I mostly see her as Rose McIver in The Lovely Bones movie.



 Rhett Clark,  22
If I don't update soon just assume I'm looking up Nicholas Hoult pictures. Although he is one of those people who looks different depending on the lighting.
 
Now, this is how Hoult actually looked at 22

But in my head Rhett's a little more:

Oh, and I like this one because...Rhett has a 14-year-old sister and I like this pose for siblings.
  
Bonus picture
Daniel Reese, 66

Tessa Holiday, 42


I think that's all for now. I'll probably have more as we get into it.

Recap
Juliana struggled to survive in jails and halfway houses in Florida but now she's back in Connecticut with her Dad, Tessa and their daughter and working at a diner. She's  invited to a Memorials' Day party in Freeport, LA to see Rhett Clark. A boy she hasn't seen in three years...

(Okay, I lied about the double chapter thing. These chapters are longer than I thought)

Playlist
Chapter 3
-1- My Own by Whitaker
-2- Take Me There by  Rascal Flatts
-3- House Party by Sam Hunt
-4- Stay Alive by  Jose Gonzales
-5- Out of The Woods by Ryan Adams

Sunday, June 26, 2016

Let's Go !



So, I've kind of been away longer than I planned and this post has been sitting in draft for a while so it's a little outdated. But  I've been working on UL and I have a lot of short chapters to get us started so let's go.... 




That Outline

I'm just learning the art of the outlines and a while ago Lile asked me to show a little bit of my outlines and since I can't show my UL outlines I thought I'd share some of my Vice outlines. The UL ones are a little bit more detailed, but you'll get the basic ideas. This is what the outline for the last few chapters of Compulsion looked like:

The colors represent the POVS...and the MK is for Maxwell's storyline and the AG is for Alan's storyline. Although...looking back on it I'm not sure why Maxwell's is MK and not KM.

I mentioned I have two outlines for UL. The second outline is more of a timeline because as I said we are going to be doing some time jumping.
 
United Light Chapter 1 & 2 
We are going to start off with quite a few double chapter posts because we have some shorties ! We are now going to step back in time to a few weeks after the events of UL2 where Juliana has been sentenced for stealing evidence out of a police car (for Sawyer when he was making meth) and prostitution / soliciting sex online when she was trying to make money to pay Caine.

Playlist
Chapter 1
Dreamers by Isbells

Chapter 2
-1- You've Got Time by The Wind and The Willows
-2- Sink or Swim by Lewis Waston


Saturday, May 7, 2016

Let's Re-imagine Something New











Questions I Missed
I actually didn't intend for that post to have so many questions, so I clocked out early,but here are the ones I missed.

Is there something you know about the characters that we don't ? THAT YOU CAN SHARE. IT IS OKAY TO ANSWER THIS AS AN ESSAY !!

So, Haley and Maxwell are the characters with the least amount of story overall so I feel like I know a lot about them that never gets put in the serials, but I'm sure I'll include later.

Also I have something that I wanted to explore in this serial but never really did about Sara. She is really not 100% okay with Luce being a cyborg.She is afraid the surgeries to his brain and cybernetics could have messed up his conscious since Luce is so agressive. That's why she sent him away from the cartel life  to boarding school and also why she doesn't let him hold Rias in chapter 2.

In the back of her head she thinks he will kill Rias out of jealousy.

I'm actually really curious in what ways Compulsion is an answer to Hidden and not Sundays. 


I never thought of it this way, but yes this is more Sundays re-written. I said Hidden because I still think of everything being very much Alan-centric and he's not in Sundays. I think a reason I like writing Sundays is because I like writing these two characters who are just stuck in a place and will always be there and how they make that work.

Boxers or Briefs ?
Rayne - Boxers, because he thought he was infertile for a while
Alan- Briefs
Jean - silk Bananahammock because he is a professional sex worker
Maxwell and Haley - Boxer Briefs because they are in a uniform
Minnow - Thongs because she wears a lot of tight skirts
Sage- Doesn't really wear underwear
Sara - low rise bikini cut because she has a stomach tattoo to show off

Why did Isla's marry young ?
Isla married young because she fell in love and she needed a reason for it to be okay that she left her family's home even though they were all kind of a mess.

Is Isla a good mother ?
So, in retrospect I probably would have taken the thing about Skylar/ Rias not caring about Isla out. I was kind of going for the deep-down-in-his-baby-brain-he-always-knew-she-wasn't-his-mother thing. That's why every scene 'Skylar' is in he is crying.








Let's Recap
Warning: This serial sounds so insane when you put it all together.

18-year-old Juliana Reese is sent away from the United Light commune to be married to Sawyer Miller. But Sawyer isn’t about the UL life and neither is Juliana. When the commune leader, Caine realizes they aren’t doing what he wants he threatens Juliana and tells them if they pay him half a million dollars he will leave them be. And just to ensure the money he kidnaps Sawyer’s girlfriend Elisa.

Sawyer resorts to selling meth and is shortly arrested in a lab explosion. When he goes to jail Julianna is forced to find...other means. When Sawyer gets out they return to give Caine the money, but Caine wants to keep Juliana on the commune--she fakes a pregnancy to go back with Sawyer and Elisa to Miami.

I probably should have been end of story here but…

Juliana goes back to Miami and falls for Cortland, a rich New England frat boy.  It doesn't end well and then Elisa gets a phone call from Rosa, her friend from her time at the commune that things are changing and she needs help to escape. They race back to get her and find that Caine is being more controlling to the members.They are quickly caught sneaking around and Caine takes Juliana.

Caine keeps her in his house as his fiance and figurehead as someone who left the fold and came back. He tortures her to get her to cooperate and she learns about the darkness behind UL and about the young Tranquility Lights Caine picks off the street. She witnesses Caine kill Rosa's fiance for defecting and learns that UL has been stockpiling illegal weapons. 

When Caine takes her to one of his recuritment trips she is able to escape with the help of her father (and one of the TLs...). She goes to her parents condo in Connecticut that is a safehouse and she sees older TLs have been staying there, but they  have to go back to the commune to help get more people out.

When they go back, a struggle ensues and the commune is raided and they are all free.


United Light RetCon


Sawyer is no longer Caine’s illegitamte son. Instead he’s related by marriage--meaning  that one of his aunts is married to one of Caine’s brothers.

United Light II

Juliana is dealing with the trauma of being held captive by Caine, her mother's death and the raid. She has selective mutism and  moves in with her father at his condo in Connecticut. They are soon joined by Tessa and her daughter Hallie. Tessa had been placed with Juliana’s Dad after her mother died by Caine but Juliana soon figures out Tessa and her Dad were having an affair when Tessa stayed at a shelter that UL members volunteered at.

Juliana is adjusting when she gets a summons to Florida where Raleigh Collins--whose brother, Logan was engaged to Rosa and killed by Caine--represents them in the trial.. But one piece of evidence--a tape of Caine beating her-- has been altered and unless they find the original it could ruin Juliana’s case. Juliana and Rhett--a TL who helped her escape from UL-- go off to find the original tape. When the get back they are ready for trial except….

The defendants lawyer has ID’d tape of Juliana breaking into a police car to steal evidence to protect Sawyer and they also dig up prostitution ads they had set up to lure men to sell drugs.

While Caine is given 18 years, Juliana is given 3 years at a halfway house...because Florida still has very strict Regan-era drug laws.

RetCon United Light II
  • There is an epilogue where she gets off a bus in CT, but that  doesn't really exist in this timeline.
  • Also, in this serial Rhett takes Juliana to his childhood home, but that has been retconned (er, Rhett-coned) out.

United Light Liberation Prologue
Prologue
Playlist
-1-  I Was Born A Dreamer by SHEL










Sunday, May 1, 2016

Quick Wrap Up with Gifs (Warning : No New Chapter in this post)

So, here is a little playlist for the wrap up post. These are songs that weren't used and I don't see them having a space in UL3. My scratch playlist had 159 songs and about  ~94 of them ended up in the serial. Okay, let's wrap up !


 


Your reaction to the parentheticals in this post title




 So, Vice is over and I'm just.....

 
  ....but I am excited to be doing UL full time

 

Seriously guys, I have 10 Chapters done and a 25 page outline (Who am I ???)

 

  Unlike Vice, UL Has Been A Lot Less

And A Lot more


And Maybe Even Some...

  ....MAYBE

 

 I know you all want to know how much of OHG is in there but I'm not telling

But there will be some fluff

The reaction I expect from the prologue will be this

Or This

Or This


 Or....possibly...this
 
 
Seriously, the prologue is a doozy and I want some honest reactions when the time comes! 

 

 

Wrap Up

 I thought I'd start things off with a little timeline showing how the sections play off each other.

January 2100 - Alan,19 is kidnapped (Vice 1)

December 2100 - Rias is born

June 2101- Rias is kidnapped

July 2101 - Operation Risen Sun happens and Maxwell is shot in the leg and goes to hospital

August 2101 - Maxwell and Haley meet.

September 2101 Alan goes undercover

December 2101 - Alan attacks the Rektor and is sent to the Neo-Luddite Territory

February 2102 - Maxwell begins work at Camp Harmony

August 2102 - Haley is arrested and sent to Camp Harmony

January 2103 - Harlow is shot

April 2103 - Haley and Maxwell are kidnapped by Alan

Other than that I don't have much to say about Vice ending...like I've said it never really feels over. I've been chipping at this story for nearly 2 years and I'm glad to have some new things in my head. I've said goodbye to the characters for now, but they will be back!

United Light Liberation

So, I finally went back and gave all of the United Light stories names:


If there are any lingering questions leave them in the comments and I'll be back very soon !


Monday, April 25, 2016

Plot Twist






Plot Twist

From Chapter 20:
"It turns out when I actually try I can perfectly imitate my Dad’s ability to walk into a room and charm everyone"


From Chapter 23

"..Strange,”
“How so ?”
“No, sir I—mean Corp. Strange,” St. John corrected  quickly."There."
...
St. John pointed to a crowded table of corporals who were all caught up in a story from the charismatic man in the center.

  
When I started thinking about revisiting Haley and Maxwell the character of Corp. Strange--who hates Haley--always stuck in my mind. From word one of the outline I toyed with the idea of Strange and Alan being the same person. I didn’t drop a lot of hints to his identity because I wanted Alan to actually be good at being undercover.

But more on that later.


Lol, Lile

In her comment section Lile asked me about the bathroom situation in the last chapter and it made me lol because I kind of considered writing it in, but then didn't. I always think it's one of those funny things about whether writers include bodily functions in their books. I mean, I guess it does make things more realistic.

Anyway, like I said Maxwell and Haley are both male and there is a sink so...yeah. But I also wanted to add that after about the 4th day of starvation that stops being a problem.

Okay, that's enough on that.

Recap
Haley and Maxwell get taken hostage for 13 days by Audrina and Corp. Strange, er Alan Gray....

Compulsion 37

Playlist 
-1- Black Ships by Club Gem
-2- When You Go by Linn Onberg
 

Thursday, April 21, 2016

You Belong in A Story

Last time I talked about looking at other writer's Pinterest boards with faces, so I thought I’d share some of my favorites faces. I think a lot of these are just models, but some may be celebrities I don't recognize:

Oh, also I like these as possibly Minnow/Alan:





Such A Tease
I feel like I am being such a tease talking about my future projects...but I will say at this point the sequels are super short. They kind of started as just writing exercises for me and then kind of morphed...the Vice one is the only one I see being 3-6 chapters long.

I will do a UL3 update soon, I'm just gathering GIFs



Chapter 36
Recap
Three POWs are placed at Camp Harmony and Haley starts talking to them. In other news after letting Felix and Marco leave from prison early Maxwell gets a call from Haley's sister that her house has been burned down.
Also, St. John and Strange are making plans


Chapter 36
Playlist

-1- Please Don't Leave Quite Yet by Adam Agin
-2- Wrecking Ball by Scars on 45
-3- Keepsake by Slow Skies