Shawna is Unoriginal

The Place They Call The End of The World
Well, I wanted to give Lile some official respect. Her novella  blew me away, it was so perfect ! I read it multiple times just to get every bit  of awesome out of  it.

I do have to make one exception.  Jean throws knives at one point and that strikes me as really out of character. While within the Veritas realm we don't actually see Jean fight to much, in my head he wouldn't throw the knives, he would like to keep his pain infliction personal. Other than that, it is perfection and has all the feel I want for Vice. Serious kudos, Lile. . . it only took like 3 years.

I Did A Thing
So, the Vice thing is going.....s-l-o-w-l-y (update ! I actually got an outline going that I want to keep). I'm have an outline-ish thing together, but I'm probably going to throw it out pretty soon and start free falling. Anyway, something sort of happened to me...I got an idea for a new serial. Like it out of the blue has been following me around and it kind of meshes with the idea I had for doing more with Blessed Hearts. I'm still waiting for it to fully materialize, but i have some clear character sketches in my head. They just need a plot and things to do. *To TVtropes*

Shawna is Unoriginal
I am loving this T-Doll action and I decided to do some of my own. Now, it would take me forever to slosh through everything I have done so I decided to TDOLL style a few chapters from UL. More specifically, I did a chapter that represents Julianna's relationship with the three boys in her life

And you know what ?

I learned a lot about these characters and about my serials in the process. I also TDOLL-ed  the Veritas Reboot chapter to explain the changes, but that's going to come later.

I was going to post them all at once, but each chapter is about 8,000 words so I decided to put them separate. 

I've hopefully provided enough context that you don't need to re-read anything.

Kirsten Stewart, Lack of Subtlety and Why the CIA may come after me one day...Chapter 11 of UL.

Well This is Awkward

"Whenever you feel an impulse to perpetrate a piece of exceptionally fine writing, obey it--wholeheartedly--and delete it before sending your manuscript to press. Murder your darlings."

- Sir Arthur Quiller-Couch 

 

Okay, well this is awkward...this whole thing has gone through a lot of phases since I posted my first "remixed" chapter. The thing is when I posted that snippet, I didn't mean to post chapter one, so in this post you will see the post that was supposed to go with chapter one and some new stuff. I have to admit, I wasn't sure I was ready to even do this again, but what can I say...I'm keeping up with LiLe again now. So here goes. (;

Something....
So, one of the things that really bothers me about chapter 1 being put up is I didn't get to use the playlist. The only song I really think you need to listen to is "Something" by The Beatles. It's the song that plays when Allison and Alan are dancing outside of the party. I'll embed a YouTube link to it, since the original song is hard to find.  As for the other songs...I'll probably keep them and use them at a different time.


Everybody Hates a Remix (old post)
So, the more I think about it, the more I realize it might be kind of strange that I am re-mixing one of my serials and I want to explain how I got to this point. It's actually two things that brought me here.

Do any of you remember En Moritas ?  I hope not. It was a series of flash fiction I was writing about how all the characters died. Some of the deaths were metaphorical and many of them actually took place several years into the characters life. I was going to name each short after a painting (one was called The Persistence of Time) and it was going fine. I actually went back to one several times.

Anyway while struggling to write one, all I could think about was how much I didn't like Veritas. I'm okay with Hidden and I'm partial to Mimic, but I didn't like Veritas because it got so out of control

So, I decided to re-write. Also, out of the En Moritas stories, I started thinking of more plot points. So many new plot points.

The second thing that happened was a little thing called On Higher Ground. I hit a big brick wall hard with that one. It just didn't give me the same excitement Veritas had given me. So, with all this in mind I went back.

In other news, working on the reboot has actually re-sparked United Light for me. But don't count on a reboot because I recently read through the whole thing and I wouldn't even know how to being to distill that story.

How To Write A Remix ? (This is new !)
I have to admit, learning how to remix was a task for me. I wanted to try something different. As many of you may know...I'm a pantser. A huge one and it has worked for me, like Rhett's role in UL came out of nowehere. Heck, Rhett came out of nowhere. But with this remix I actually outlined a bit and wrote mini character bios.

Then I decided to take another Lile-esque approach. I made a list of scenes I'd like to see and I intended to write them, but I only got around to one. Still it helped me orient the story. Then  I started experimenting some as well, I'd pick random songs of my playlist and write a scene to them.

And of course research. I've been reading some cyberpunk short stories from the 80's. I've been focusing a lot on cyberpunk writer Michael Swanwick (as opposed to the more well known William Gibson), because he writes in first person like I've been doing. He is a lot more sci-fi-ish and does a lot of thing with time travel, which is amazing, but not something I see myself doing.

Speaking of POV, one of the first things I did to this story was put it in present tense. My first instinct to make it in past tense, like Alan was relaying the story and then have it catch back up, but I liked the immediacy of present and changed it. I wanted everything to be "realtime" I even considered taking out 'said' but decided against it. Hopefully I caught all the "-ed" but if I didn't bear with me.

As you can see It's been a process and I believe I can successfully remix this story, I just don't know how long it will take, but it will be one word at a time.

Pinterest
Oh, here is that Pinterest I mentioned. I don't have much on it now, it is mostly things I found that go with the chapters. Mostly character inspirations and their clothing. Hopefully I can make it more robust later.


CHAPTER TWO....
In the process of this remix , I changed chapters 1-3 about four times. I'd have an idea and then I'd have to re-align previous chapters to go with this new concept. With that in mind I wanted to be atleast 5 chapters ahead of my posts, so I wouldn't write into a corner, but what can I say....I'm ready to post early.

A lot of this chapter is the same, but also has a few more significant changes to backstory and dialogue. The further we go along, I think you'll see this is not the same story. Like AT ALL.

CHAPTER TWO
The Playlist:


 

No Day But Today

Well, this was entirely unplanned.

It just kind of felt right to post something today. And I really didn't want to wait until 2014. So here is a preview of chapter 1 of Vices. I've been sitting on this for...a while. I'm not posting the entire thing because I am in the process of (slowly) changing bits and don't want to mess up continuity.

Playlist
Playlist.com is pretty much dead to me now ): They don't allow embeds anymore, so I need to find a good substitute because I love my playlists! I used YouTube today  since there are only two.

-1- Shake it Out by Florence + The Machine
-2-Have it All by Jeremy Kay

Chapter 1 Snippet ! 

1. Shake it Out by Florence + The Machine

2. Have it All by Jeremy Kay 

Because 50 Shades of Gray was already taken...

“A purpose of human life, no matter who is controlling it, is to love whoever is around to be loved.”
― Kurt Vonnegut, The Sirens of Titan

Little story, I went to a title generator and while nothing was usable one of the tiles it gave me was The Living Fear. I liked it, but it doesn't fit the story I'm telling. After some time I decided to just stick with the name Veritas, but in the throws of research I came up with Vice. So, here we are.

See you around !

As told in .GIFs

"I just wanted answers. 

All I got was you"

- Shawna Harrison, Still Untitled Project aka Veritas Remix 

                                         

The reaction I expect:

The reaction you probably have after 4 months

Me these last few weeks

Me as I post this

Me after I post this

How I hope you are all now 

See you around !

Can I Ask You A Question ?

Oh, look I'm still here !

Hello Eveyone ! So, as promised I have an interview for the upcoming (yes, it’s still coming) Veritas reboot. For this interview I have Sarah Grace, Alan Gray, Minnow Dory, Jean Dory and Alex Haley and Me ! It’s a big group, so I’ve rented some studio space for us.

SH: Hello, thank you all so much for joining me

Sarah: Well, let’s be honest, we didn’t have much of a choice. But, the sentiment is nice.

SH: Um, you’re welcome. I have so many reader questions, but first of all I want to say I am so excited to have you all for a reboot of Veritas, I know it’s-

Jean: Oh, I’m sorry Shawna, but while we appreciate the opportunity you need to know Minnow and I will not be apart of this reboot. *casually drinks from flask*

SH: …

Alan: …

Haley:…

Sarah: …

Minnow: . . .Well, it’s just---

Jean:  I’ll explain. You see, I care about my sister very much and well, last time she was in one of your stories she was dead for an installment, she almost got killed countless time and not to mention all the emotional torture. I just can’t put her through that . . . not to mention I wasn't even in Mimic and the rest of them were.

Minnow: Oh, but if you promise to make it easier on us, we might consider being in it. Might. *pops pill and offers bottle to Shawna*

Shawna: *shakes head* Well, I mean I understand this, I do. But, sometimes torturing your characters is necessary to fiction. You see their strength in how they survive. I mean would Harry be as great if he didn’t suffer 11 years locked in a cabinet ?

Jean: I’m sorry, Shawna, but we just can't. I know it will be hard to reboot your series without your main character—

Shawna: Oh,actually Alan is the main character

Alan: *takes pill from Minnow* Told you

Shawna: I really hope that's Aspr--

Jean: Really ? He is the main character ? Look, I love Alan like a brother, but let’s be honest there are more exciting heads to get inside of.

Alan:  How did you not notice this, you self-centered jackass ? The story is told from my point of view.  Listen, Jean you are good in small doses, but too much is overkill.

Jean: Small does, eh ? 

* Jean pulls out a knife*

Jean: Let’s see how many small doses this takes before it’s overkill

Shawna: No, you can’t have a—

*Alan causally takes out a gun and points it at Jean*

Alan: You literally brought a knife to a gun fight.

Shawna: Stop ! You can’t kill each other you’re supposed to be friends

Minnie: Well, let’s face it, they have been more like frenemies.

Sarah: I wonder whose fault that is ?

*Minnie points her finger at Shawna*

*Sarah points finger back at Minnow.*

Shawna: *frantic*  Can you stop this ?

Sara: I don't know, if I were you I'd write it down. This is probably better than what is going on in whatever reboot your making.

Shawna: *gapes*

Sarah sighs and pulls out a gun and fires warning shot. Jean and Alan stop fighting.

Shawna (shouting): Okay, guys we aren’t supposed to have weapons in here ! *pulls at hair*

Sarah: Listen, you idiots can kill each other after this over. Give us time to take bets.

They both sit down slowly eyeing each other.

Shawna: Um, th-tha-thank you.

*Minnow pets Alan's hand as he sits down*

Jean: Alan, you pretty boy idiot, I swear to God, if you touch my sister I will cut you to pieces and I’m sure you know where I will start. .

Minnow: *giggles* Stop it, Jean.

Jean: I’m serious.

Shawna: Okay, now back to the questions. Um, October S wants to know . . . will Jean and Alan be together in the reboot.

*Jean glares at Alan.*

Shawna: Let’s do the next question. Okay, this is a fun one. Someone wants to know if you could pick a new title for the series, what would it be ? This is a great question, because I am struggling with the--.

Alan. I’m sorry, this question is a little to meta for me, I can’t answer it.

Minnow: Well, I’d call it like, Cognition or The Melencholy of Alan Gray or something,

Shawna: Really? That’s what I was thinking.

Minnow: Well, I’m an extention of your imagaination, so I just went with what you are thinkning. Let’s face it, anything any of us say is an extenstion of your thought process.

Shawna: *Shuffle cards* Okay, um Linda Leigh, a great writer friend of mine, who I got this idea from wan—

Haley: *taps Shawna's shoulder* Excuse me, Miss Harrison ?

*Shawna breathes deeply*

Shawna: What?

Haley: I’m sorry, I just wanted to know if I was going to be in the Veritas reboot ? I know--

Shawna: *surprised* Wait, that’s actually a good question. Well I--

Sarah: I’m sorry who is he ?

Minnow: Yeah.

Jean: Is he Alan’s new supporting cast, since we quit ?

Shawna: Okay, one, you can’t quit and two Haley is in the second installment--

Sara: Oh, you mean that thing you wrote with little to no female characters ? Seriously ? I mean if I gave a shit, I’d be offended.

*tossed cards aside*

Shawna: I don’t understand. If none of you care or even want to be in it, why did you come ?

Sara: It’s not that I don’t care. Look, just let me put my hair back and kick ass and I will do whatever you want.

Shawna: Ooh, about that. You see in the reboot--,

Knock, knock, knock 

Shawna: Okay, well it looks like our rental time is about to be up. So, let’s end with any final thoughts. Anyone have anything that will offer us some insight into the future of anything ?

Jean: I saw you are working on a sequel to Blessed Hearts, how is that going to work  ?

Shawna: . . . 

Jean: ....

Shawna: Okay, well that’s all the time we have for today. I hope you have all learned about what is next for the Veritas reboot and I--

*power goes out*

I tried guys, I really did.

20 Days Later . . .

The Super Secret LiLe Project

Okay, so I looked at my previous comments to see if there were any questions I needed to answer and Lile mentions her new WIP in it. She says we still manage to steal ideas so, maybe if I study chapter 8 and 9 of Blessed Hearts long enough I can figure out something about An American Fairytale. Y/Y ?


The Super Secret Shawna Project
Okay, there isn't one of these, but wouldn't it be awesome if there was. I'm just trudging along, trying to figure out how to make a coherent new plot and not get sucked into TVTropes.

Don't call it a Comeback
I also want to point out my idea of Re-booting series, isn't exactly original either.

Seroul ?
Sorry to say, but I can't cosign on to this ship. I wanted their relationship to be very close friends. The relationship between Soul and Seraphim was the first one that came to mind and the first one I really developed. This is kind of random, but it is based on the trailer for the movie, Restless--which at the time hadn't been released. I just think Mia and Henry looked like Seraphim and Soul to me.

Anyway, this movie has a 27% rating on Rotten Tomatoes so . . .I think the trailer is still nice, if not super spoilery.

Chapter 10
This chapter's music took me around the ringer. I kept making playlists and the not saving them, so I had to try and remember what songs I wanted. I had to use my new adage of when in doubt . . .use Breaking Dawn soundtrack. (:



-1- Violet Hour by The Civil Wars (youtube link--this song won't embed into Mixpod)
-2- You Found Me by Vitamin String Quartet
-3- Cold by Aqualung
-4- It Will Rain by Aqualung

Seraphim and Soul have made it to the Demon world, but Rin is now fighting her own Demons when Dark shears her wings.


Chapter 10

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